First some people think that it is responsibilities of governments to take care of the environment while other believe that it is responsibility of the citizens discuss both views and give your opinion

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of the

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responsibility; meanwhile, others argue that the

citizens

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should be more responsible

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the

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action should be done by both parties. On the one hand, the

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has bigger authority to take

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the

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environment

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in terms of amount of budget and policy implementation. The

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usually gets tax revenue from

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and they can allocate some to do something for the

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.

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, the budget utilisation can be combined with the implementation of appropriate policy related to

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environment

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.

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, they can

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more comprehensive actions than their

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.

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, the

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can implement a policy for determining

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of public areas that should be covered by parks or forests and

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they can allocate some of their budgets to plant new trees as well.

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, some believe that taking

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of the

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is likely to

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citizen's responsibility because they

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enjoy the impact of

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action.

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, they should start to do particular actions,

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small

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scale, to contribute to

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the

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. Taking

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of their ecosystem can be started by changing their behaviour;

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, allocating some areas of their private house for planting some plants or trees. If

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action can be implemented massively, it will have a huge contribution to

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air

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quality of their cities. In conclusion, taking

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of the

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can be done by both the

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and the

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because all stakeholders play an important role

to preserve

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the

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.