The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural/and becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart explains several reasons
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the table elaborates how these causes affected three regions during 1990s
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Overall
, there are three main causes of land
degradation which had the biggest impact
on Europe's land
.
Looking at the table, over grazing
became the main cause of Correct your spelling
overgrazing
degradated
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degraded
degradation
land
with more than a third. The main cause was followed by deforestation and over cultivation
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over-cultivation
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almost 60% combined.
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Moreover
, if looking the
detail in some regions, Europe had the biggest Change preposition
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impact
on unproductive land
with almost a quarter of their land
. The root cause of this
issue in Europe was mainly due to
deforestation, contributing for
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, the second largest impact
of degraded land
was oceania
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land
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the least
over grazing
but had no problem with Correct your spelling
overgrazing
over cultivation
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over-cultivation
Lastly
, the region which had the least impact
was the
North America with merely 5% of their Correct article usage
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