Describe the benifits of Smart phone in your job and in your personal day by day activities

There are many cutting-edge technology devices that I have

been

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used. If I have to

chose

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one

to talk about, it could be the hand phones. You know I have been using the hand

phone

for

long

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period of time.

However

recently

i

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just bought

the

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new

smart-

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smartphone

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phone

that the old

one

had been had

serious

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a serious

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problem

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problems

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. The new

smart

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smartphone

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phone

definately

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definitely

has more features than the old

one

. When it comes to how

does

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this

highend

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high end

high-end

technology gadget has been helping me in

day

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by day activities, including in my

job

and my personal usage, I would say that it has been facilitating efficiently

in

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various purposes.

First

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and

formost

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foremost

I can think of is that I can

use

this devices

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these devices

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to

comunicate

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communicate

with

distance

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relatives conveniently. Thanks to the

outsdanding

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outstanding

functions of application

softwares

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software

,

such

as

zalo

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whatsapp

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WhatsApp

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viber

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and so on, the

comunication

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communication

becomes no more barrier by geography area compared to the traditional mobile

phone

or

land line

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landline

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telephone.

Moreover

, I

also

use

the

phone

as

the

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form of entertainment and

exericise

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exercise

. I mean that I can relax after

the

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hardworking

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day by watching

short

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a short

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video of yoga or

mediation

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meditation

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prastisese

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practice

. It

is

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really

heplp

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helps

me to ease my mind

hept

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helps

me to have

bester

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better

sleep,

also

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even

help

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me to have more energy for the

newdays

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new days

nowadays

.

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, I have better breath control now after I have taken breathing joga for a month. I think that

i

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will keep

this

practice

for

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continuously in future, and would

recomend

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recommend

this

method of

excercise

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exercise

to

other

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others

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. I always

belive

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that other people will

also

have the same

fellling

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feeling

and have the same result that I have been experiencing. How to do that. It is quite simple

by getting

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on the

youtube

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YouTube

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app,

then

we shall be

seaching

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searching

for

the

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short clips with those

key world

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keywords

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relating to yoga or meditation,

such

as relaxing yoga in 15 minutes, or

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for sleeping improvement. So there

are

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much more than what I have just mentioned, but hereby I

would

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not mention any more on personal

use

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benifit

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benefit

benefits

. I will mention

one

or two typical

benfits

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benefits

in

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my

job

when

i

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got the

smart

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phone

. It is

reallly

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really

that my

job

has been improving significantly. You know I am working

in

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the

constuction

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construction

project, and must be attending so

much

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daily, weekly, and monthly meetings.

Therefore

,

i

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use

my

phone

to plan it. I mean I take notes

those

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meeting

shedule

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scheduled

on the

calander

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calendar

app on the

phone

,

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and

also

set the alarm function to remind me before

the

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each meeting going to start.

Hence

It

help

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me to

arranging

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the work efficiently. Since

then

,

i

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am

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raredome

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rare

to miss the meeting

,

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and have time to prepare the

relative

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document for

meeting

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in advance. really I appreciate

for

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this

piece of useful

cutting eage

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cutting-edge

technology devices. I could say

nowdays

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we can't live well if we don't have it in

hands

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our hands

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.

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Furthermore

, I

use

this

device to search for

realtime

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info and current affairs news to update my marketing

stratergy

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strategy

in my

job

.

For example

, to have

the

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competative

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competitive

pricing to offer the quotation to the client, we need to survey the market about the current market material cost, labour, and the

focasting

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forecasting

casting

of pricing trending, so that we can list out all the valuable terms and conditions in the quotation. When we are in the

negotating

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negotiating

meeting with

client

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, those are the bullet points to secure the contract with the best deal. It is because

,

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we did

analysis

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all

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the risks

would be

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before the final

discusiion

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discussion

with

client

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the client

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.