The graph displays data about the number of people who participated in different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia over a twenty-year period from 2000 to 2020.

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six types of

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activities

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shown in the chart which two of them had an increase in the

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, two stayed almost the same and only one of them witnessed a fall in the

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. Regarding the numbers for

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club and Martial arts,

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there was some fluctuation in the

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the number of participants remained the same as

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beginning of the period in the chart.

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, the only activity that lost

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attractiveness for the people was Amateur dramatics, despite increasing gradually in the first five

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, there was a steady fall in the next fifteen

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for

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activity.

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Table tennis increased dramatically in the second decade and the

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went from twenty to over fifty, which

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is the biggest rise among these activities. Looking at the details for Musical performances, it can be seen that in the first five

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the

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number

of participants was zero,

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in the number for

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fifteen

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.