the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now,and plans for its development. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaprisons where relevant.
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map
which
called Islip, in present and a Correct pronoun usage
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plan
of
its development in future.
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Overall
, the town
centre will be modernized and a new dual cariageway
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carriageway
roadwill
surround the Correct your spelling
road will
roadkill
town
.
Looking at the current , there is no bus station , shopping centre and car aprk
which in new Correct your spelling
park
plan
there will be replaced with shops and main
road will be converted to Change the article
the main
pedestrian
. The park which Add an article
the pedestrian
a pedestrian
in
located in Correct your spelling
is
south-east
, will be Add an article
the south-east
got
smaller and Verb problem
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school
will be the Correct article usage
the school
sameas
it is.
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same as
plan
new housing is going to be constructed near the park and north-east of the Add a comma
plan,
town
.other housing areas will be remained
with no changes.now there is only a main road and Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
tow
oneway roads to park and school which in the new Correct your spelling
two
plan
there will be a big dual carriageway that connects west to east with tow
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two
way
from north and south of the Fix the agreement mistake
ways
town
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