the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now,and plans for its development. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaprisons where relevant.

The

maps

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illustrates an area

which

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called Islip, in present and a

plan

of

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its development in future.

Overall

, the

town

centre will be modernized and a new dual

cariageway

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carriageway

roadwill

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road will

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surround the

town

. Looking at the current , there is no bus station , shopping centre and car

aprk

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park

which in new

plan

there will be replaced with shops and

main

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road will be converted to

pedestrian

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the pedestrian

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. The park which

in

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located in

south-east

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the south-east

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, will be

got

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smaller and

school

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the school

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will be the

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same as

it is. In future

plan

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new housing is going to be constructed near the park and north-east of the

town

.other housing areas will

be remained

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with no changes.now there is only a main road and

tow

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oneway roads to park and school which in the new

plan

there will be a big dual carriageway that connects west to east with

tow

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way

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from north and south of the

town

.