the graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
The
barchart
illustration about how many people Correct your spelling
bar chart
visite
three museums, over a Correct your spelling
visited
five
Correct your spelling
five-year
years
period between 2000 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen steadily
rise in the Change the word
steady
visitors
of National-China
and MET-New York Change preposition
to National-China
museum
over the period in Fix the agreement mistake
museums
the
question, Correct article usage
apply
while
the visitor of Edo-Tokyo have
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
Between
over five Change preposition
apply
years
. Another interesting point is that Edo
Correct article usage
the Edo
museum
Capitalize word
Museum
have
the most Wrong verb form
had
visitors
in 2000, but in 2005 National museum
Capitalize word
Museum
have
more Wrong verb form
had
visitors
than others.
Looking at the details, as regards MET visitors
halved to 6 millions
in 2001, Change to singular
million
then
there was a steadily
rise in the next four Change the word
steady
years
. If we look at National
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the National
museum
the figure Capitalize word
Museum
was rise
steadily Change the verb form
rose
between
five Change preposition
over
years
over the period in question.
By
contrast
the Add a comma
contrast,
visitors
of Edo
fell graduallyChange preposition
to Edo
6
Change preposition
by 6
millions
Change to singular
million
visitors
between 2000 to 2003. After that despite falling gradually to 6 millions
, the figure Change to singular
million
then
leveled off between 2003 to 2005.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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