The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above illustrates the trend in the
consumption
of three different types of fast food by British people
from 1970 to 1990. Generally, there have been increases recorded in the amount
of burgers and fish and chips consumed by the foodies in the UK, while
people
enjoyed less pizza over the years.
With less than 100 grams taken on average, Fish and Chips ranked the second most popular instant catering option among Britons in 1970, which is
followed by a gentle rise within the next twenty years. Wrong verb form
was
From
1980, there has been a stark increase in the Change preposition
Since
consumption
of the national dish with a peak has been reached at
1990, making it Change preposition
in
a
dish with the most Correct article usage
the
consumption
amount
, and 5 times more than the record in 1970.
Being the least consumed junk food option on the list, on average people
only consumed 50 grams of burgers in 1970. While
the amount
increased slightly in the next 15 years, the intake of Hamburgers rose significantly from 1985, overtook
pizza with the Wrong verb form
overtaking
amount
reached
300 grams in 1990.
With the Wrong verb form
reaching
lost
of a third in the Replace the word
loss
amount
of pizza eaten, there has been a gradual decline in the consumption
by British people
from 1970 to 1990.Submitted by 788seal on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, people, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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