Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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problem

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one

of the primary

issue

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on earth. Many individuals say that the

loss

of certain

species

of

plants

and

animals

is the major environmental matter,

while

others believe that there are more

foremont

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foremost

environmental problems.

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essay will explain both

point

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of

views

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and give my personal standpoint in detail. On the

one

hand, many people argue that the primary cause of environmental damage is the

extinction

of

plants

and

animals

due to

several reasons.

Firstly

, a

loss

of particular

plants

and

animals

will have an effect

to

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the food chain shift.

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, the

extinction

of snakes will have a huge impact on

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increase

of

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the rats

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rats

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population. A high number of

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the mouse

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mouse

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will

leads

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to many diseases

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humans, like

diarrhea

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and leptospirosis.

Secondly

, the

loss

of particular creatures will have an effect

to

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an environmental disaster.

For example

, the

extinction

of

mangrove

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mangroves

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will increase the opportunity

of

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abration

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abrasion

and create an uncontrolled impact if a tsunami

happen

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.

On the other hand

,

Instead

of choosing the

loss

of some

species

as the main environmental issue, some people believe that there are more important

problem

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,

one

of them is

air

pollution

.

Air

pollution

can bring more detrimental

impact

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. As an example,

air

pollution

will have an influence

for

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people by infecting respiratory organs.

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case

worsen

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by the increasing number of private vehicle

ownership

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which

increase

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the amount of

carbons

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carbon

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on

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air

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the air

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.

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harmful element

on

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air

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is the primary reason

of

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global warming, which breaks the

ozon

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ozone

layer. To summarize, the

extinction

of some

animals

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animal

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and

plants

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plant

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species

is

one

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of

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a natural issue.

However

, increasing

of

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air

pollutions

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pollution

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will produce more magnificent disadvantages. After a thorough analysis of

this

subject, I firmly believe that there are more crucial

problem

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problems

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of

environment

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the environment

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rather than

species

loss

, which is

air

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the air

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pollution

problem

.