Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher. Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher and say: •What is your motivation to learn a new language •How can the teacher help you •When you will be ready to start

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Dear Madam, I hope
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letter finds you in good health. I am writing
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letter regarding
to learn
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a new
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, as I want to
beacome
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become
a
multi-languagal
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multi-language
person,
due to
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this
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, my mentor told me about the best coaching centre where I can
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learnt
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learn
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a new
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. My teacher shared me all information through
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
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including contact details, location and other informative things. I am planning to move abroad for my
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studies, I want to improve my skills
while
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learning the
french
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French
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language
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.
Furthermore
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, I am fluent in
an
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english
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,
in
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this
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language
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, I
do
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communicate very well with others which is a strong point for me. Despite that, I want to learn
French
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language
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beacuse
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because
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language
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is
a
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second most popular
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in
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abroad, and I
also
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applied online for a job where
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learning
french
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is
complusory
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compulsory
.
Moreover
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, I will be ready to learn
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language
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as soon as possible. When my mentor shared
a
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contact details with me , at that time, I
did registration
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with an institution and
visit
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it. I requested
to
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you to
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provide me
a
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separate room as I am a
begginer
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beginner
learner of
french
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and start classes from
tommororw
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tomorrow
. Thank you for replying
me
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in
short
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time. Sincerely yours, Raj.
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coherence cohesion
Try to break down your ideas into separate paragraphs to improve clarity. Each paragraph should have a single, clear idea.
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There are a few grammatical errors that could be improved for better clarity, such as 'beacome' which should be 'become', 'multi-languagal' which should be 'multilingual' and 'beacause' which should be 'because'.
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Ensure that you maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter, as some parts are a bit informal for a formal letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and closes with appropriate greetings and sign-offs, which are important for maintaining a formal tone.
task achievement
Your motivation for learning a new language is clearly expressed, and you have provided relevant background information.
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