The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration presents the changes
of
public Change preposition
in
library
that happened during 20 years.
Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
Overall
, we can notice that the main hall got reduced. There is no enquiry desk, which is
changed for self-service machines and Wrong verb form
has been
information
desk. The library is more advanced.
The tables and chairs from the main area Correct article usage
an information
dissapeard
, Correct your spelling
disappeared
instead
of them they made new
cafè but changed the location, so the hall is more spacious. The sector for adult fiction books got smaller. On the left side from the Correct article usage
a new
entrance
we can see Add a comma
entrance,
section
named: Add an article
a section
the section
all reference books
, which is not that large.
Correct your spelling
All Reference Books
Room
with books for kids changed and now in space for lectures. Correct article usage
The room
New
place for children is located on the left, and got bigger. Now, it has space for storytelling events. There is no more reading room, which is replaced by Add an article
A new
The new
computer
room, next to the main entrance door.Correct article usage
a computer
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