The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration presents the changes
of
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in
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public
library
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libraries
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that happened during 20 years.
Overall
, we can notice that the main hall got reduced. There is no enquiry desk, which
is
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has been
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changed for self-service machines and
information
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an information
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desk. The library is more advanced. The tables and chairs from the main area
dissapeard
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disappeared
,
instead
of them they made
new
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a new
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cafè but changed the location, so the hall is more spacious. The sector for adult fiction books got smaller. On the left side from the
entrance
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entrance,
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we can see
section
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a section
the section
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named:
all reference books
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All Reference Books
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, which is not that large.
Room
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The room
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with books for kids changed and now in space for lectures.
New
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A new
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place for children is located on the left, and got bigger. Now, it has space for storytelling events. There is no more reading room, which is replaced by
computer
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a computer
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room, next to the main entrance door.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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