The tow maps illustrate the internal changes that occurred to the layout and the functions of the facilities in a library from 2002 until the present day.
The maps describe the development of the library in the layout and the functions of the
infrastructures
between 2002 and now.
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infrastructure
Overall
, it is clear that
the bigges
change is Correct your spelling
biggest
that
the removal of Correct word choice
apply
facilites
in the east and Correct your spelling
facilities
addition
Correct article usage
the addition
new
Change preposition
of new
faciliites
. Noticeably, there is an entrance still Correct your spelling
facilities
remained
in the south.
Looking at the maps more closely, we can see that the entertainment area in the northwest has been removed, and replaced by children's area, which consists of two sofas, storytelling events and children's fiction Wrong verb form
remaining
books
. The elemination
of children's book area and adult non-fiction Correct your spelling
elimination
books
and equiry
desk Correct your spelling
enquiry
inquiry
have
been done. Change the verb form
has
Also
there a lecture rooma
and cafe Correct your spelling
room
are
have been added in the northeast and southeast respectively. All Unnecessary verb
apply
adults
fiction Change the noun form
adult
book
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books
has
been moved to the east and an information desk and Correct subject-verb agreement
have
self- service
machines Correct your spelling
self-service
also
have been installed in the east. The computer room , which has taken place
of Correct article usage
the place
reading
room, was located in the southwest. Add an article
the reading
a reading
Moreover
, all reference books
was
put in the west, where Change the verb form
were
was
the adult fiction Correct subject-verb agreement
were
books
. Finally
, there an
entrance constructed in the south and still there.Add a missing verb
is an
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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