Government should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or diasgree with this statement?

Today, many people believe that the government should focus more and take

actions

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on maintaining and constructing railways

instead

of roads. Personally, I disagree with

this

statement because both

road

and

railway

services are equally important.

Firstly

,

trains

are the most popular mode of

transportation

of

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supplies and

capable

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of carrying crowds efficiently.

For example

, building materials and office employees are mostly transported via

trains

.

Additionally

,

the

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railway

tracks are more durable than roads and significantly reduce or diminish accidental rates.

As a result

, the cost of maintenance and risk of lives are minimized to a considerable extent and proved by the survey of Social Development authority through deep analysis.

Nevertheless

,

railway

transportation

is inexpensive and reduces daily commuting time as

railway

transportation

is traffic-free and quick.

On the other hand

, people will have to use separate times to book tickets and schedule their work

according to

the train time.

This

causes an imbalance in work life.

Furthermore

,

road

transportation

such

as taxis,cars and buses are more convenient and comfortable.

For instance

, individuals are unable to reach the doorstep

through

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trains

whereas

personal vehicles or buses are able to and provide luxurious seating with more privacy and comfort. At the same time,

road

transportation

generates a greater income

to

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the government through tickets and taxes compared to

trains

and

this

will lead to a skyrocketed economy which contributes to

overcome

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poor infrastructure facilities like health care and education. In conclusion, even though

railway

transportation

supports transporting

of

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supplies,

reduce

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reduces

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maintenance

cost

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costs

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and

increase

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increases

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security rates

however

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, however

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, money should be spent

at

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on

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road

transportation

too

due to

its greater revenue gained , convenience and comfortability.