The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals with different
coffee
and tea consumption preferences in five Australian urban areas—Sydney,
Melbourne
, Brisbane,
Adelaide
, and Hobart.
It is clear that
, except for
Adelaide
, the majority of residents in the other four surveyed cities in Australia preferred going to a café for
coffee
or tea in the
last
four weeks. The fewest people in all five places chose to buy fresh
coffee
during the same period.
To begin
with, visiting a café for
coffee
or tea was the most popular choice in Sydney,
Melbourne
, Brisbane, and Hobart, where approximately 61%, 64%, 56%, and 63% of citizens opted for
this
activity, respectively.
However
,
Adelaide
was different, as 50% of its residents preferred purchasing instant
coffee
,
while
around 49% chose to buy and drink in a café. Compared to
Adelaide
, fewer people in Sydney,
Melbourne
, Brisbane, and Hobart opted to purchase instant
coffee
in the
last
four weeks, with figures around 46%, 48%, 53%, and 54%, respectively, making
this
option only the second choice. Buying fresh
coffee
was the least popular option in all five places. Except for Sydney and
Melbourne
, where around 44% and 42% of individuals, respectively, chose
this
option, the figures for the other three cities were below 40%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, melbourne, adelaide with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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