Some people think that one of the ways to solve environmental problems is to increase price of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people

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about the

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price of fuel for

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and other vehicles in order to decrease environmental issues.

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essay totally agrees with that statement because increasing would reduce demand among residents and increase their usage

to

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public

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. On the one hand, there is a strong correlation between

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of

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the value and

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in the

using

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,

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is because it would affect in a direct way

on

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the people who can afford it and make them use

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a bicycle

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or

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instead

of these cars.

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, it has been shown that most people who

life

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in China

they

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restrict their

using

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for

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fuel because

it

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expensive for most nations.

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, the implementation of that

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would make most

inhabitant

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use public transportation as

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and

taxy

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taxis

which contribute to

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the effects of

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gasoline. Establishing

of

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various types of public

transports

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in countries

are

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essential because they would not

quiet

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using that if there

is

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no

substitute

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.

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, a recent study showed that developed countries provided a lot

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transportation which in a direct relationship led to

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a decline

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in the number of individuals who use their own cars. In conclusion, I completely agree with that, because in my opinion I prefer to start with straightforward steps

such

as

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the price and

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them

different

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as a result

that would decrease

in

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the

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usage and increase their awareness about

risks

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the risks

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of that gasoline of plants and animals.