The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the DAY in 1992. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the DAY in 1992.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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graph illustrates the use of
radio
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and
television
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during different hours of the
day
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in 1992.
Overall
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, in 1992 the
radio
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had bigger audiences than
television
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before noon.
However
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, during the afternoon the percentage of the UK population watching
television
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increases remarkably, overtaking the
radio
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listeners. After midnight, both curves drop, reaching almost the lowest point. In the UK, during a normal
day
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in 1992, from 6 am to 8 am, the percentage of
radio
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listeners
increases
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increased
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from 6% to 28% at its highest.
Whereas
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television
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audiences are much lower during
this
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time of the
day
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. Indeed from 6 am to 12 am the figures for
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television
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the television
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public do not go above 6 %.
Then
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after 8 am, the
radio
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audiences start to fall progressively throughout the rest of the
day
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, and they reach their lowest at 2 am (1%).
On the other hand
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, the use of
television
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grows slowly
after noon
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afternoon
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and
then
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at 4 pm the curve shoots up until its peak at 8 pm with 46%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, television, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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