The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the DAY in 1992. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This
graph illustrates the use of
radio
and
television
during different hours of the
day
in 1992.
Overall
, in 1992 the
radio
had bigger audiences than
television
before noon.
However
, during the afternoon the percentage of the UK population watching
television
increases remarkably, overtaking the
radio
listeners. After midnight, both curves drop, reaching almost the lowest point. In the UK, during a normal
day
in 1992, from 6 am to 8 am, the percentage of
radio
listeners
increases
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increased
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from 6% to 28% at its highest.
Whereas
television
audiences are much lower during
this
time of the
day
. Indeed from 6 am to 12 am the figures for
television
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the television
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public do not go above 6 %.
Then
after 8 am, the
radio
audiences start to fall progressively throughout the rest of the
day
, and they reach their lowest at 2 am (1%).
On the other hand
, the use of
television
grows slowly
after noon
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afternoon
show examples
and
then
at 4 pm the curve shoots up until its peak at 8 pm with 46%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, television, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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