Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon of whether the responsibility for teaching

children

to become well-behaved citizens belongs to

schools

or

parents

. In my view,

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strongly believe both of them are equally important and indispensable factors.

However

, I will discuss and explain my point of view in

this

essay.

Firstly

, it is obvious that

parents

are the first people to make contact with them and

also

spend the most

time

with them,

due to

this

reason, their

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is quite vital to the child.

This

is because the child will tend to imitate the performance of what the dad and mom are doing.

For example

, if one of the

parents

likes to play violent games, it will lead to

children

exhibiting vicious tendencies in the future.

Therefore

,

parents

play a significant role in

children

's lives; it is necessary for them to educate their kids in good manners.

On the other hand

, when

children

get older, the

time

they spend in school becomes and even overtakes the

time

that they spend at

home

.

Hence

someone said

schools

are considered as the second

home

of

children

.

Children

in

this

age

of

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group are easily susceptible to the

behavior

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behaviour

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of

other

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others

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around them,

thus

educators have the obligation to build a supportive environment.

For instance

, a friendly environment fosters pupils' sympathy.

Hence

,

schools

are

also

important to form the

children

to be excellent members of society. In conclusion, I firmly believe that

parents

and

schools

are essential and have equal responsibility in teaching

children

how to be good members of their community.

While

parents

represent the

home

for

children

,

schools

are their second

home

.

Therefore

, they spend most of their

time

in both homes and learn about morality, life skills, and language, making them effective in their society.