The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The maps illustrate the proposed transformation of the Norbiton industrial
area
in the future.
Overall
, the current
area
of industries will develop into a residential district. For that reason, there will be significant improvement in facilities and infrastructure. In the current state, there is a main
road
throughout
east
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the east
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and west in the south of the town, leading to a roundabout in the central
area
, and turns to the east. Factories are situated on either side of the main
road
. A river running east and west is located to the north with a large
area
of farmland on the other side. After reconstruction, two more branches are planned to be constructed on the main
road
, and one will extend across the river.
Instead
of factories, houses are proposed to be erected alongside the roads. The previous part of the
road
on the east will have access to a school next to a playground. Adjacent to the current roundabout, another small one will be built, with nearby shops and a medical centre.
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