The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.  

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the average proportions of three potentially harmful ingredients—salt, saturated
fats
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, and added sugars—found in
breakfast
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, lunch, dinner, and
snacks
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in the USA.
It is clear that
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the evening meal primarily makes up the largest average share of all three categories of ingredients.
While
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the majority of added sugars are typically found in
snacks
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, most sodium and saturated
fats
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are ingested during dinner in the USA.
To begin
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with, both the evening and midday
meals
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represent the highest average intake of salt and saturated
fats
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. Specifically, 43% and 29% of
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this ingredient
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these ingredients
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are taken in during these two
meals
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, respectively,
while
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37% and 26% of
fats
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are utilized during the same
meals
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in order. As for added sugars, the pattern is different.
Although
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dinner still contains a notable proportion of
this
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sweetener (23%),
snacks
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make up the largest share, at 42%.
Furthermore
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,
breakfast
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and
snacks
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contribute to the remaining 28% of sodium. As for saturated
fats
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, these two
meals
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still comprise the two smallest shares. Specifically,
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16% of these
fats
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are included in
breakfast
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, a slightly higher percentage (21%) is found in
snacks
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. When it comes to the consumption of added sugars, lunch and
breakfast
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make up a combined 35%, at 19% and 16%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fats, breakfast, snacks, meals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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