Some people believe that those moving to abroad should try to adopt themselves to the new cultures while others think there is no need to do so. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Certain individuals think that
move
to Wrong verb form
moving
new
place and Add an article
a new
the new
adopt
Wrong verb form
adopting
the
new Correct article usage
a
cultures
should be tried Fix the agreement mistake
culture
by
themselves Change preposition
apply
while
others are disagree
. Change the verb form
disagree
While
relocate
and Wrong verb form
relocating
adopt
the new Wrong verb form
adopting
culature
is Correct your spelling
culture
fastest
way to acceptance in the community and it helps to build strong relationships with neighbours and Change the article
the fastest
locals
society. I believe that Change the noun form
local
this
is a
good for Change the article
apply
immigrant
who are willing to migrate from Fix the agreement mistake
immigrants
thier
own Correct your spelling
their
country
to different nations.
On the one hand, when the
person migate from one place to Correct article usage
a
anohter
place it is very difficult to understand language and culture but Correct your spelling
another
by
Change preposition
apply
adoptioting
local customs and societal norms can help to indulge Correct your spelling
adopting
into
Change preposition
in
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
This
is because they can communicate with neagihbours
if they know the Correct your spelling
neighbours
lunguages
and Correct your spelling
languages
language
cultures
and it helps to make friends in different nations and it shown
an appreciation and willingness to understand and Wrong verb form
shows
participatite
in the local event. Correct your spelling
participate
participating
For example
, Indian
Add an article
an Indian
citizen
who went to Canada Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
they
are Correct pronoun usage
apply
celibrating
Correct your spelling
celebrating
hallowen
and Correct your spelling
Halloween
adopt
the new environment that makes life easy in that Wrong verb form
adopting
country
. However
, i
would argue that it Change the capitalization
I
shown
that Wrong verb form
shows
emigrate
wants to Correct article usage
an emigrate
immigrant
and he or she gets Replace the word
immigrate
appreication
from the Correct your spelling
appreciation
comunity
.
Correct your spelling
community
On the other hand
, it is very hard to reserve
Correct your spelling
preserve
their
own's identity and cultural Correct pronoun usage
one
haritage
Correct your spelling
heritage
becasue
of Correct your spelling
because
this
maintanining
one's own cultural practices can provide a sense of stability and Correct your spelling
maintaining
confort
in an unfamiliar environment. Correct your spelling
comfort
That is
to say, when these individuals sattle
down in different nations they have Correct your spelling
settle
moral
responsibility to pass on Add an article
a moral
an
own culture to their children. Change the word
their
Furthermore
, a multicultural presence in a foreign country
can promte
diversity and enrich local heritage. Correct your spelling
promote
For instance
, a
diverse Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
cultures
in Canada provide new prosperty
those come to different Correct your spelling
prosperity
property
country
. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Therefore
, i
believe that a balanced approach can preserve both Change the capitalization
I
cultures
and environment
.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the environment
although
i
believe that Change the capitalization
I
multicultural
community helps to Correct article usage
a multicultural
integration
and Replace the word
integrate
acceptance
in local society. it can provide a sense of stability and comfort Replace the word
accept
enviornment
.Correct your spelling
environment
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