You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
chart
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illustrates the proportion of visitors by area of origin
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the table shows tourist's preferences at
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specific holiday accommodation in Australia. It can clearly be seen from the pie chart that people from Asia are the highest group. The table
tells
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that Europeans tend to stay longer with specific characteristics than the rest of the groups. The pie chart
depicts
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that visitors from Asia are the highest proportion with 37%
while
individuals from Europe slightly less at 35%.
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, 18% of the tourists are from the USA and only 10% are from the rest of the world. The table shows that European tourists tend to stay longer
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approximately 16 days and more preferred camping or caravan accommodation with swimming or sunbathing as the main activity. For American tourists, they stay around 14 days in a 4-star hotel doing mostly sightseeing.
On the other hand
,
while
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enjoying sightseeing, people from Asia mostly only stay around a week in a 5-star hotel.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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