The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.
This
chart
illustrates and marks the difference between 7 different companies each making use of public and groundwater
.
A close look at the chart
reveals that most of these factories have opted for ground over public supply. Namely, chemical factories and metal production take up a large portion of groundwater
being used in various industries. In addition
to these two, paper and textile productions utilize groundwater
eight times more than public supply.
In contrast
to the factories mentioned before, foods/drinks and machinery have more use for public supply water than groundwater
by a larger margin. Machinery , for instance
, utilizes only a mere 10 million cubic meters of groundwater
as opposed to the hundreds of public supply
.
Fix the agreement mistake
supplies
Overall
, the chart
shows the polarity of the type of water being used in different crafts. That being said, the chart
also
shows that every company use a combination of these two types.Submitted by parsajahan3 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, groundwater with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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