The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in China in four periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate information about full-time and part-time female and male
students
in China in four different periods at 10-year interval
.
From an Fix the agreement mistake
intervals
overall
perspective, the number of permanent students
decrease
throughout these years for both genders. Comparison between semi-permanent Change the verb form
decreases
students
and permanent ones showed that there were significant
farther for these two for both genders.
Looking in more detail for permanent Change the word
significantly
students
, women’s tendency towards full-time education was higher than men’s at
Change preposition
in
first
year. The initial number of full-time female Correct article usage
the first
students
was approximately 1200 and then
, declined near to 1100 before again decreasing to 1000 and finally
reached under 1000. In comparison with female students
, male learners’ preferences presented a dramatic decline from 1200 to over 500.
Moving to part-time learners, female
gender had Correct article usage
the female
fluctuating
pattern which could be considered as a steady trend at around 200, Add an article
a fluctuating
while
male learners plumed throughout the years; in a way that it reached near zero. In comparison with full-time pupils, the number of part-time students
was remarkably low for both genders in a way that full-time
education approach was over 500, Correct article usage
the full-time
however
, part-time one was under 250.Submitted by TUTOO on
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