You have been volunteering at a local organisation but you can no longer do so. Write a letter to the head of the organisation to explain why you must leave. In your letter: Describe the work you have been doing and what you have learnt. Explain why you must leave. Suggest someone to replace you.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding withdrawing my name as a volunteer in your organisation. Let me explain
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my work in more detail. I have been working for
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healthcare department since my joining and my duties are to provide appropriate medicines and food.
Besides
, I have learnt to overcome many obstacles, become more sociable, and enhance
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skills because of handling many handicapped patients. As I informed you to
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Abroad for my tertiary education, I got my visa
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, going there next month to attend my classes. I know one of my friends, who is
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to take care of others. He has completed his education in
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field, helping to do
this
job in a well-mannered and effective way. I look forward to hearing back from you with an acceptance of my offer. Yours Sincerely, Pawa
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task achievement
Your letter covers all the required information, but adding more specific details or examples regarding your experiences could enhance the response.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure each paragraph fully develops a single idea. For example, separating your reasons for leaving and your suggestion for a replacement into distinct paragraphs could improve clarity.
suitable writing tone
You have maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout the letter, which is very appropriate for this context.
coherence cohesion
The letter is generally well-organized, and each paragraph has a clear purpose.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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