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# 61. The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel

# 61. The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel
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The table illustrates the rates of distance in miles travelled per person per year by eight different kinds of transportation in England from 1985 to 2000.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 from 1985 to 2000 witnessed a dramatic
increase
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Moreover
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, most
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the people preferred using the car.
To begin
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 with, from 1985 to 2000 saw a significant
increase
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 in using all modes which started with 4,740 to 6,475. In terms of the car the highest number of people preferred them and it witnessed an
increase
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 from 1985 to 2000 which was around 3199 to 4806. The most interesting notice is that the long-distance bus experienced a sharp
increase
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 which started with 54 in 1985 to 124 in 2000.
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, walking and local buses saw a decline from 1985 to 2000 with 255 to 237 and 429 to 274 respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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