The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The illustration presents how
plastic
objects like bottles are recycled. The procedure is man-made and cyclical, and it takes 9 stages.
Firstly
, plastic
wastes are collected from the garbage. The next qualified stuff is sorting them so later they can get compressed into big blocks. Cubes made in the previous stage are now crushed in the machine, which seems to be dangerous. After
this
, the small objects that are left are being
washed in a tank with water.
At stage six Unnecessary verb
apply
plastic
pellets are produced and later they have to be heated to become raw material. The material is packed and prepared to produce end products, which are new products but, from old plastic
objects that were collected at the beginning.Submitted by weronika07022 on
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