The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The illustration presents how

plastic

objects like bottles are recycled. The procedure is man-made and cyclical, and it takes 9 stages.

Firstly

plastic

wastes are collected from the garbage. The next qualified stuff is sorting them so later they can get compressed into big blocks. Cubes made in the previous stage are now crushed in the machine, which seems to be dangerous.

After

this

, the small objects that are left are

being

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washed in a tank with water. At stage six

plastic

pellets are produced and later they have to be heated to become raw material. The material is packed and prepared to produce end products, which are new products but, from old

plastic

objects that were collected at the beginning.

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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

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