WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

Firstly

,

this

pie chart gives information regarding below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.

This

tablo

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table

has 4 categories. These are ‘Local male, Non-local male, Local female,

Non- local

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Non-local

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female’.

Secondly

, when we look at the panel Local

male

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males

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had 44% in 2001 and 38%

2010

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in 2010

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. After that Local

famale

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families

had 43% in 2001 and 35% in 2010. Both Local

male

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males

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and Local

female

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females

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almost

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have almost

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same

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the same

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rate.

Also

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Also,

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2010 is more intense than 2001.

Furthermore

total

had

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was

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38.849 in 2001 and 54.081 in 2010.

As a

result

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result,

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generally

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generally,

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16% increased. Taking everything into account the two panels are close to each other. All in all, the diagram which is above mentioned describes selecting and reporting the main features, and

make

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making

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comparisons where relevant.

Also

Local research student and international research

student’s

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student

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rates. From my point of

view

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view,

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Local had 73% in 2010. Local was low.

Nonetheless

, 2010 had higher.