You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of different kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares the
number
of five kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. IDespite
the lack of specific Correct your spelling
Despite
number
data, it gives detailed increasing percentage
.
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
According to
the chart, only the number
of private cars and others had unbalanced growth. The other items, including motorbikes, public transport, and trucks, either remain steady or decrease.
The decreasing percentage of trucks reached 40%, which was significantly higher than the 20% of motorbikes. Additionally
, the number
of public transport, as mentioned above, was steady, with about one million new registers in 1996 and 2006, respectively.
As for the number
of private cars, the statistics are remarkable. In 1996, it had five million new registers, which further
increased by 59%, barely reaching 25 million. In comparison, the increasing percentage of others was relatively limited, merely 25%.Submitted by hx88375757 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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