Some people think people can exploit animals for any purpose they need, while others do not think so. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the past, other creatures in

this

world below

human

Fix the agreement mistake

humans

show examples

tends

Wrong verb form

tended

show examples

to be

a

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

subject

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

their needs, and it is often argued that

animals

should

be trade

Change the verb form

be traded

show examples

to meet

people

's demands

in

Change preposition

for

show examples

goods or services,

while

some individuals believed it shouldn't be.

This

essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion. To commence with,

animals

were the common subject to meet human needs because it has a lot of features that are suitable for

people

.

Although

, some

people

will think

that is

an

Remove the article

apply

show examples

animal cruelty

but

Remove the conjunction

apply

show examples

sometimes it

also

Add a missing verb

is also

show examples

for the betterment of some

animals

.

For instance

, sheep wool is

very

Add an article

a very

show examples

versatile natural material, which makes it a perfect candidate for all kinds of

application

Fix the agreement mistake

applications

show examples

in the textile industry, and it

used

Add a missing verb

is used

show examples

to produce binnies, scarves, and garments. So, the process is what we

called

Wrong verb form

call

show examples

wool

sherring

Correct your spelling

shearing

sheering

sharing

,

as a result

of that, the sheep will have a new smooth wool in the future.

Secondly

, other

people

think that exploiting

animals

should not be allowed because it

will be

Wrong verb form

is

show examples

against to

animal welfare act

Correct your spelling

Animal Welfare Act

show examples

, and is

an

Remove the article

apply

show examples

animal abuse.

Moreover

,

people

tend to abuse their power and sometimes

used

Wrong verb form

use

show examples

it

to

Change preposition

on

show examples

helpless creatures.

For example

,

some

Change preposition

in some

show examples

nations eating dogs is still

custom

Correct article usage

a custom

show examples

,

this

animal is not for food but

people

still do it. In my opinion, alternatives should be studied to lessen the

used

Replace the word

use

show examples

of

animals

for human benefits.

Due to

overexploitation may lead to potential environmental consequences.

Therefore

, individuals should be responsible

and

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

have some empathy towards

animals

, and

used

Wrong verb form

use

show examples

other resources to meet their needs and wants. In conclusion,

balance

Add an article

the balance

a balance

show examples

between the

used

Replace the word

use

show examples

of

animals

should be observed for the betterment of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

society.

In addition

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

, the Government should take action to ensure the welfare of the

animals

.