The line graph shows the cost for watching films. The pie charts show the shift in the percentage of market share among the three types.
The graph illustrates the price for different
movie
sources while
the charts give information about the proportion of value share among these sources from 2005 to 2011.
It can clearly be seen from the line graph that movie
theatres continued to be the most expensive throughout the given period. The pie charts show that online watching overtook DVD
renting as the highest percentage.
The graph shows that while
cinema and DVD
steadily increased, only legal downloads fluctuated over the recorded times but were able to surpass DVD
cost. Cinema tickets started in 2005 at around $9 and reached $14 in 2011, making they
the highest. Correct pronoun usage
them
Similarly
, priced at $6 in 2005, DVD
increased moderately to $8 in 2011. Conversely
, online watching was at around $7 in 2005 but dropped to just below $4 in 2007. Nonetheless
, it recovered and continued to increase significantly and surpassed DVD
in 2010.
The pie charts show that while
other movie
sources dropped, only legal downloads were able to increase drastically from only 5% to 56% in 2005 and 2011, respectively. On the other hand
, DVD
renting fell hard, with a decrease from 59% in 2005 to 26% in 2011. Likewise
, movie
theatres also
dropped by almost a half from 36% to 18%.Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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