The chart below shows the percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas in 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas in 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts compare data about the proportion of Australian inhabitants, who were born in either
this
country or other countries, that lived in urban or rural regions
in
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2 various points
of
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time namely, 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, it was important that the fraction of the population who lived in
cities
climbed
instead
of the other areas;
furthermore
, most people who were living in Australia were foreign.
According to
the diagrams, at the start, 50% of communities who were born in Australia lived in
Cities
;
then
it went up and reached 65% in 2010;
in contrast
, in Rural areas and Towns, which were second and third , respectively one-fifths and 30% reduced significantly and hit the same score as each other in 2010 at 15%. The graphs demonstrate that a majority of the population who lived in Australia were not natives;
additionally
, most of them chose
cities
for living owing to the fact that it scored 60%;
thereafter
, countryside and towns recorded 40 and 10 per cent. In 2010
cities
' citizens jumped and touched 80%;
moreover
, the amount of towns was the same as the prior
while
the portion of villages dipped enormously and hit 5%.
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