The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the The diagram below shows time spent watching TV by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999
The bar chart illustrates the difference
of
age and gender of people who watch TV in the UK in two years 1995 and 1999.
Change preposition
in
To sum up
, noticeable that old people had the highest rate of the two genders and the years. And there is no differences between ages from 35 to 44 and 45 to 54,
Firstly
the men
in 1995 was pretty steady in the middle of the ages and Correct quantifier usage
number of men
then
increased onward 32
.Change preposition
to 32
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