The table shows key data on the demographics of four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows key data on the demographics of four countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates important information on the demographics ( population,
GDP
per capita, and average
life
expectancy
) of four nations (
China
, Russia, the
USA
, and the
UK
).
Overall
,
it is clear that
each country topped in one demographic
China
has the highest
number
of population,
while
the
USA
has the largest
number
in
GDP
,
whereas
the
UK
has the biggest
number
of average
life
expectancy
.
To begin
with,
China
has the biggest
number
of people which is around 1,357,000,000
whereas
the
UK
has the least
number
of population which is 64,937,000. In terms of
GDP
USA
has the largest
number
of money comprising 53,681$
on the other hand
,
China
has the lowest
GDP
around 6,807. In terms of average
life
expectancy
UK
has the highest
life
expectancy
around 81,5 ,
while
the
USA
has the lowest rate of
life
expectancy
which is around 69.2.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, life, expectancy, china, usa, uk, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic metrics
  • age distribution
  • urbanization levels
  • population growth rates
  • life expectancy
  • birth rates
  • immigration policies
  • economic development
  • geographical size
  • historical factors
  • health care systems
  • infrastructure
  • quality of life
  • proportion
  • population size
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