The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the daily average
electricity
request
while
the pie chart depicts the proportion of
electricity
usage. It is clearly seen from the graph that in winter, the demand for
electricity
is higher than in summer.
Moreover
, the chart shows that above half of the
electricity
utilization
activities
are for heating purposes. The graph shows that in winter,
electricity
usage increases significantly to just below 50000 units from below 40000 between 9 and 12 pm
while
in summer it only jumps moderately from around 16000 to 20000 units.
In addition
, even though between 12 pm and 3 am the use of
electricity
in summer decreases from approximately 18000 to around 14000, there is an increase in winter from around 34000 to 40000 between the same time period. The pie chart displays heating
activities
are the highest kind of
activities
for
electricity
usage with 52.5%.
Moreover
, the second-highest with 17.5% is kitchen-related
activities
.
Furthermore
, both "lighting, televisions, radios" and "vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools" are at the number of 15%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity consumption
  • Kilowatt-hours (kWh)
  • Energy demand
  • Power grid
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Non-renewable energy sources
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Conservation efforts
  • Industrial sector
  • Residential sector
  • Commercial sector
  • Fluctuation
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Efficiency improvements
  • Seasonal variation
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