The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the daily average
electricity
request while
the pie chart depicts the proportion of electricity
usage.
It is clearly seen from the graph that in winter, the demand for electricity
is higher than in summer. Moreover
, the chart shows that above half of the electricity
utilization activities
are for heating purposes.
The graph shows that in winter, electricity
usage increases significantly to just below 50000 units from below 40000 between 9 and 12 pm while
in summer it only jumps moderately from around 16000 to 20000 units. In addition
, even though between 12 pm and 3 am the use of electricity
in summer decreases from approximately 18000 to around 14000, there is an increase in winter from around 34000 to 40000 between the same time period.
The pie chart displays heating activities
are the highest kind of activities
for electricity
usage with 52.5%. Moreover
, the second-highest with 17.5% is kitchen-related activities
. Furthermore
, both "lighting, televisions, radios" and "vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools" are at the number of 15%.Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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