The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied bar charts indicate various projects for generation by sector in the world over a twenty-year period in the future.
A glance at the graph reveals that the highest percentage of
projections
will be services
. Change the verb form
be serviced
be servicing
However
, producers will not tend to provide a projection for agriculture over the period.
In 2040, the projected production
by sector for services will be as popular as in 2060 at 40% and 41%, respectively. (Which are the highest amount
of projections
over the period). Moreover
, the percentage of projection for manufacturing in the world production
in 2040 is going to be as many as in 2060 at 31% and a third (33%), respectively.
In contrast
, the amount
of agriculture projections
for global production
by sector will be 4% in 2040, just ahead of 2060 at %1. (Which is the lowest amount
of projections
over the whole year). Similarly
, the amount
of materials projected production
will accounts
Change the verb form
account
3
% and 4% in 2040 and 2060, respectively.Change preposition
for 3
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Vocabulary: Replace the words projections, production, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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