youger people need to be treated like adults if they commited a crime

Many teenagers commit crimes but get treated differently than adult criminals. Despite that many

people

think

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important to punish the younger generation in the same

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as adults, I would argue that it is not fair and logical. Younger

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brain functions differently and punishing them in the same

way

as older

people

will be a lot damaging

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their future careers. Studies

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shown that the

brain

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of

children

still need to develop more and

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to situations differently because of their young age. Punishing a child

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an adult may cause them to have trauma because of the complicated space where they will have to be

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.

Children

need small adjustments in their needs to already realize that they will not act the same

way

again.

For instance

, when

children

break the rules made by their parents, just being grounded or refusing game time will make them learn to not do the act because they would like to have those privileges.

However

,

this

same punishment won’t work on an older person.

Furthermore

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punishing

children

like older

people

and in most cases ending up in

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jails

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, will mess with their future not only

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college applications. Sometimes

children

like to get their

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attention and would do that for any cost. So

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addressing the main issue and reason that pushed

this

child to commit a crime, something that isn’t easy to realize for their brain development, is the solution.

To conclude

,

children

are different

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adults, physically and mentally and is

therefore

impossible to punish them the same

way

. Each group category should be treated differently and mostly helped to not break their future.