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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of individuals seeking information from a tourist office in the UK over a six-month period.
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, the data reveals that
while
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 in-person visits and phone
inquiries
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 increased, email or letter
inquiries
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 saw a decline. In January, about 900 people contacted the office by phone, and nearly 400 visited in person. Over the next few months, a shift occurred between March and April, with a growing preference for in-person
inquiries
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. By June, around 1900 individuals were obtaining information in person, making it the most popular method. Phone
inquiries
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also
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 grew, reaching approximately 1600 by the end of the six months.
On the other hand
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, email
inquiries
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 started at around 700 in January but saw a gradual decline. By June, the number of emails or letters sent to the office had dropped significantly, with fewer than 400
inquiries
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 made through
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 method.
This
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 steady decrease highlights a shift away from written communication.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words inquiries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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