The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The chart delineates the enquiries for information at a tourist office in the UK for six consecutive months.
Overall
, the number of in-person requests showed an upward trend Linking Words
as well as
by telephone Linking Words
while
by letter/email kept decreasing.
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Firstly
, it is shown that the increase in in person is higher than by telephone Linking Words
as well as
by letter/email.In January sitting above 400 going up to 800 in March and reaching its peak of 1900 in June.Linking Words
However
, by telephone showed some fluctuations starting from 900 going down in February Linking Words
then
experienced a boost in April ending at 1600 in June.
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Finally
, by letter/email requests went down 700 almost 500 in April again dipping down 400 in May and Linking Words
then
remaining steady till June.Linking Words
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