The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer
The chart compares the average working
hours
and the percentage of stress-related
illnesses
across eight different professions. The data reveals an interesting trend: despite working fewer
hours
, lecturers experience the highest levels of stress-related health problems. Looking at the working
hours
, lecturers work the least, averaging 25
hours
per week, followed by chefs at 30
hours
. Lawyers, writers, and programmers work progressively more, at 35, 40, and 50
hours
per week, respectively. Doctors,
on the other hand
, spend 50
hours
working,
while
movie producers work 60
hours
a week. The longest working
hours
belong to businessmen, who put in an average of 70
hours
weekly. When examining the incidence of stress-related
illnesses
, a different pattern emerges. Only 5% of programmers report stress-related health problems, the lowest figure among all groups. Writers and lawyers follow with 8%,
while
chefs and movie producers each report 10%. Stress-related
illnesses
affect 11% of businessmen, and doctors have a slightly higher figure at 15%. Notably, lecturers, despite working the fewest
hours
, suffer from the highest rate of stress-related
illnesses
, with 25% affected.
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