The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer
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The chart compares the average working
hours
and the percentage of stress-related illnesses
across eight different professions. The data reveals an interesting trend: despite working fewer hours
, lecturers experience the highest levels of stress-related health problems.
Looking at the working hours
, lecturers work the least, averaging 25 hours
per week, followed by chefs at 30 hours
. Lawyers, writers, and programmers work progressively more, at 35, 40, and 50 hours
per week, respectively. Doctors, on the other hand
, spend 50 hours
working, while
movie producers work 60 hours
a week. The longest working hours
belong to businessmen, who put in an average of 70 hours
weekly.
When examining the incidence of stress-related illnesses
, a different pattern emerges. Only 5% of programmers report stress-related health problems, the lowest figure among all groups. Writers and lawyers follow with 8%, while
chefs and movie producers each report 10%. Stress-related illnesses
affect 11% of businessmen, and doctors have a slightly higher figure at 15%. Notably, lecturers, despite working the fewest hours
, suffer from the highest rate of stress-related illnesses
, with 25% affected.Submitted by kuba.glogowski on
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