The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many
books
were read in the Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014 by different genders.
Overall
, the Women read more
books
than
Men
until 2013 but
then
faced a downward trend
while
the
men
showed the opposite. In 2011 Women levelled at roughly 5000
books
with
Men
at 3000
books
and remained steady until 2012. By 2013 the women reached their peak of 10000
books
however
they experienced a sudden fall dipping the number down to 7000 in 2014.
On the other hand
,
Men
showed a uniform increase in 2012 at 4000 until 2013 levelling at 10000
books
.
Moreover
, it kept rising significantly and by 2014 it reached its all-time highest number of 14000
books
.
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