You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a possible meetin

Dear Neighbour, I am writing
this
letter to express my concern regarding the parking issue that I have been facing for
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couple of days. As we know,
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of car slots have been assigned on the basis of our occupancy and the number of slots that we are paying for. Without fail, we should park our
vehicle
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at the reserved location.
Since
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, the
last
few days, after coming from work I have been struggling to park my car
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the given space. I understand that sometimes we have guests at our place who stop by and we have to arrange for the parking space for them. But, it is very insensitive of us to occupy others' place without any prior discussion or approval. We need to address
this
issue to live a
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life in
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society. There are various ways to tackle
this
situation.
Such
as renting a parking space in an emergency and paying the rent for
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specific hours or
to park
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the vehicle on the main road by
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permission from the secretary. To discuss
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these issues and to find a feasible solution we are holding a society meeting on Saturday at 10 am. I look forward to seeing you at the meeting. Yours sincerely, JK
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coherence cohesion
Try to use more transitions between paragraphs to ensure a smooth flow of ideas. It will enhance the logical structure of your letter.
task achievement
Clarify the specific problem instances and their impact on you more explicitly. It would help the reader understand the gravity of the situation better.
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The letter covers all parts of the task effectively by explaining the problem, suggesting ways to help, and proposing a meeting.
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The tone is polite and appropriate for communicating with neighbours.
coherence cohesion
The letter has clear paragraphs, each addressing a single idea, which improves readability.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are correctly used and provide a nice structure to the letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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