The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented

accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart illustrates
families
in owned and rented
houses
percentage
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that throughout the given period, except between 2001 and 2011, the number of
families
owning
houses
decreased
while
the number of
families
renting
houses
increased. The period from 1918 to 1971 saw a decrease in
households
in owned
accommodation
but an increase in
households
in rented
accommodation
.
Started
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Starting
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at around 76%,
families
living in owned
houses
decreased to approximately 68% in 1939
while
the number of
families
living in rented
houses
increased from around 22% to 32%.
Although
the
percentage
remained until 1953, they continued the
trend
until levelled at 50% in 1971 and switched from there. The period from 1981 to 2001 continued the same
trend
. The
percentage
of
families
in rented
houses
increased to 60%
while
the
percentage
of
families
in owned
houses
decreased to 40% in 1981. The
trend
continued until 2001 with
households
in owned
accommodation
reached
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reaching
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almost 70%
whereas
households
in owned
accommodation
reached almost 30%.
Nonetheless
, in 2011, the
trend
changed, with
households
in owned
accommodation
increased
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increasing
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to around 35%
whereas
households
in rented
accommodation
decreased to around 65%
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, houses, percentage, households, accommodation, trend with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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