The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart illustrates
families
in owned and rented houses
percentage
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that throughout the given period, except between 2001 and 2011, the number of families
owning houses
decreased while
the number of families
renting houses
increased.
The period from 1918 to 1971 saw a decrease in households
in owned accommodation
but an increase in households
in rented accommodation
. Started
at around 76%, Wrong verb form
Starting
families
living in owned houses
decreased to approximately 68% in 1939 while
the number of families
living in rented houses
increased from around 22% to 32%. Although
the percentage
remained until 1953, they continued the trend
until levelled at 50% in 1971 and switched from there.
The period from 1981 to 2001 continued the same trend
. The percentage
of families
in rented houses
increased to 60% while
the percentage
of families
in owned houses
decreased to 40% in 1981. The trend
continued until 2001 with households
in owned accommodation
reached
almost 70% Wrong verb form
reaching
whereas
households
in owned accommodation
reached almost 30%. Nonetheless
, in 2011, the trend
changed, with households
in owned accommodation
increased
to around 35% Wrong verb form
increasing
whereas
households
in rented accommodation
decreased to around 65%Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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