IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The chart depicts the
number
Use synonyms
 of data
that is
Linking Words
 requested between January to June in a travel office in the United Kingdom.
Overall
Linking Words
, the requested information via telephone and personally had an upward trend
throghout
Correct your spelling
throughout
 the period,
whereas
Linking Words
 data demand through letter or email showed a downward shift. In
januari
Correct your spelling
january
, the
number
Use synonyms
 of people requesting
for
Change preposition
apply
show examples
tourism information was just nearly 400.
Then
Linking Words
, it significantly rose to 600
by
Change preposition
in
show examples
 the following months and
peaking
Wrong verb form
peaked
show examples
 at almost 2000 requests by June, making it the highest amount across other media. Moving on
other
Change preposition
to other
show examples
 methods, the
number
Use synonyms
 of queries made by telephone was around 900 before marginally decreasing to 800 by February.
However
Linking Words
, it gradually increased to around 1000 and reached the top quantity
to
Change preposition
of
show examples
 approximately 1600 by the end of the period. On the other side, the
number
Use synonyms
 of
request
Fix the agreement mistake
requests
show examples
 via letter/email was just about 750 in
Januari
Correct your spelling
January
. It slightly fell to around 700 until March before remarkably dropping to around 400 requests by May. It remained unchanged until June.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
    What to do next:
    Look at other essays: