The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

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maps illustrate the differences between

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Harbour

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in 2000 and

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Harbour

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today and how

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harbour

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has developed since 2000.

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, it can be clearly seen that there are many

changes

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between

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two

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pictures. The

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Harbour

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today seems like a tourist attraction,

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of being a simple

harbour

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like in 2000. In detail, the most important thing

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harbour

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is the dock,

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the

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Harbour

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in 2000 had only one dock, the number of

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harbour

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now

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docks so that there are more places for ships.

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, there

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a change in the places of private yachts and fishing boats, the yachts zone would be on the head of the fishing boats zone in 2000, but now it is under. Despite some

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, there are still some unchanged points and those points are: The

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of the public beach( on the top right of pictures), the

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of the lifeboat and the

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of passenger ferries( near the

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of pictures).

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, there are some

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in the mainland

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changes

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the sea. There were

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car parks and one showers and toilets

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place

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in 2000, but now there is an extra showers and toilets zone and that new one is placed between

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parking places. Looking at the bottom of maps, there are some

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changes

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that can be noticed immediately. There is a

cafes

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and

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area on the left of

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today

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harbour

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, and the disused castle in 2000 is now replaced by a hotel and the road is extended,

tourists

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so tourists

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can go straight to the hotel.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Try to organize your details more logically to enhance the flow of your essay. Separating changes on the sea from changes on the mainland would improve clarity.

Task Response

You can improve your essay by providing more specific comparisons when mentioning changes. For instance, describe what 'under' and 'on the head of' mean regarding the positioning of yachts and boats.

Coherence and Cohesion

Avoid redundancy in your writing and ensure each sentence adds new information.

Task Response

You've appropriately noted key changes like the addition of docks, relocation of yacht and fishing boat zones, and the transformation of the disused castle into a hotel.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, providing a good framework for your report.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

277 words

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this a positive or negative thing?

In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advanages and disadvantages of gibing children this message?

The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries, they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?