The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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diagram illustrates the whole process of using geothermal energy to produce electricity.
Firstly
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, the cold water will be pumped down into the injection well, which length is 4.5 km.
Then
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,
those
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the
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cold water goes through
geothermal
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a geothermal
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zone
,
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and
pumped
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is pumped
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up as hot water by the production well. After that, staying in the condenser, it becomes to help steam to turbine powered.
Finally
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, the turbine
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apply
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produces electricity powered
the
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by the
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generator.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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