The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart and bar charts illustrate the percentage of where
dance
institutions are placed in a town in Australia (community
halls
& other, private
studios
, school
halls
, college-based
studios
) which are divided into 3 categories (ballet, tap & modern) by age in the bar charts.
Overall
, the majority of
dance
is located in private
studios
,
while
the least
dance
is located in college-based
studios
. Adolescents aged 11-16
years
old prefer modern
dance
rather than those under 11
years
old.
Conversely
, children under 11
years
old which has the highest number of
students
are interested in ballet
dance
than 11-16 of ages. The percentage of
dance
placed is up to 48% in private
studios
compared to only 24% in school
halls
after school). Whilst 18% of
dance
is located in community
halls
& others and just 10% of
dance
places in college-based
studios
. As regards as number of
students
in each age group of
dance
categories, we can see that ballet has a high disparity of
students
with approximately 300 pupils between under 11 ages as a majority,
while
11-16 ages are attracted to
this
dance
is just only 300
students
.
By contrast
, 500 pupils under 11
years
old are interested in modern classes compared to only 300
students
who are joined in the same category.
On the other hand
, the proportion of pupils in each age category shows a slight difference of 50 youngsters under and upper 11
years
old.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, halls, studios, years, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
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