The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart and bar charts illustrate the percentage of where
dance
institutions are placed in a town in Australia (community halls
& other, private studios
, school halls
, college-based studios
) which are divided into 3 categories (ballet, tap & modern) by age in the bar charts.
Overall
, the majority of dance
is located in private studios
, while
the least dance
is located in college-based studios
. Adolescents aged 11-16 years
old prefer modern dance
rather than those under 11 years
old. Conversely
, children under 11 years
old which has the highest number of students
are interested in ballet dance
than 11-16 of ages.
The percentage of dance
placed is up to 48% in private studios
compared to only 24% in school halls
after school). Whilst 18% of dance
is located in community halls
& others and just 10% of dance
places in college-based studios
.
As regards as number of students
in each age group of dance
categories, we can see that ballet has a high disparity of students
with approximately 300 pupils between under 11 ages as a majority, while
11-16 ages are attracted to this
dance
is just only 300 students
. By contrast
, 500 pupils under 11 years
old are interested in modern classes compared to only 300 students
who are joined in the same category. On the other hand
, the proportion of pupils in each age category shows a slight difference of 50 youngsters under and upper 11 years
old.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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