The bar chart shows the number of tourists visiting Country X from various parts of the world and the table displays the income of different businesses in the nation in 2007 and 2008.

The bar chart shows the number of tourists visiting Country X from various parts of the world and the table displays the income of different businesses in the nation in 2007 and 2008.
The bar chart provides information about the statistics for tourists from various parts of the world visiting country X.
While
, the table illustrates the income of different companies in the country in 2019 and 2020.
Overall
,
it is clear that
all nations witnessed a downward trend and the lowest was seen in the US and Canada over the period.
Furthermore
, the lowest recorded in the transportation and Travel Agents in 2007 and 2008. the date of foreign tourists stood at nearly 2200
thousand
individuals
in 2007,
then
it decreased rapidly to 1000
thousand
individuals
in 2008. The US and Canada stood at 2300
thousand
individuals
in 2007, and
this
was followed by a rocket decline to 200
thousand
individuals
over 1 year. China and Japan stood at 3000
thousand
individuals
in 2007,
then
went down to 2100
thousand
individuals
in 2008. In 2007, Australia stood at 2990
thousand
individuals
, after which people significantly decreased in 2008. It can be seen in the table, that the statistic for income in hotels and resorts stood at 3,5
million
dollars
in 2019, which point the figure started to fall rapidly to 0,5
million
dollars
in 2020.
Next,
Restaurants, bars, and souvenir shops stood at 2,4
million
dollars
in 2019,
then
went down slowly to 1,2
million
dollars
. In 2019, transportation and travel agents stood at 1,3
million
dollars
and decreased to 0,4
million
dollars
in 2020. Tour guides, small vendors, and other services stood at 1,4
million
dollars
in 2019, and
this
was followed by a sharp decline to 1,1
million
dollars
in 2020.
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