The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The bar chart below illustrates the proportion among different
age
groups on food and drink,restaurants and hotels, the
last
one is for entertainment in the United Kingdom in 2004
Overall
, we can see that despite the
age
group, buying food and drinks are the most useful items in
this
graphic. The absolutely different trend we can notice if we look to stay at restaurants and hotels. Teenagers or
people
who are under 30, prefer to spend their time in restaurants and hotels.
By contrast
only slightly more than 5% of them bought food and drink.
People
with the
age
range 31-45 liked to buy a meal more than the other two. More precisely the percentage of them
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being in the hotel and doing entertainment are approximately 13% and 7% respectively. Almost the same situation we can see with
people
, which had aged between 46 and 60. But
people
who were older than 61, almost did not like to stay at a hotel or have a meal at a restaurant. Exactly 20% of them like to buy a dish.
While
, old
people
with
age
between 61 and 75 like to do entertainment as twice, as old
people
older than 76 years.
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