The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures
shows
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show
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how the arrangement of a central
library
has changed from 20 years ago to now.
Overall
, the division of the floor has not changed so much.
On the other hand
, there have been major differences in the location of contents. the number of doors, and so on.
On
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In
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the
center
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centre
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of
library
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the library
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, there
have been
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were
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tables & chairs, but they have
removed
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been removed
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today.
Moveaver
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Moreover
, new
infromationdesk
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information desk
put on the middle right of the institution. On the upper right of
library
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the library
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, the area of children's books has been diminished, and there are only children's fiction
boods
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books
now. The number of doors has been
incleased
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increased
from 3 to 4. On the right side of
entrance
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the entrance
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,
new
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a new
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room has been built, so that
new
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a new
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door has
equiped
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equipped
. 20 years ago, There were no self-service machines,
however
, today's
library
has 3 machines.
In contrast
, there are the areas which have not changed.
For example
,
entrance
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the entrance
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has been located
on
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in
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the same position as 20 years ago.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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