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The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart compares the data regarding academic staff belonging to different subjects at a university in a particular country between 2005 and 2013.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the highest number of teachers are involved in
Medicine
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 and
opposite
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the opposite
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was
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is
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 true for Agriculture.
Moreover
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, from 2005 to 2013, the amount of staff increased in every subject except for Agriculture and Education. In 2005, there were 30664 members to teach
medicine
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for
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 students which was the maximum , and the least was for Agriculture, recording just 1680.
In addition
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, the greatest positive change in number of staff was
also
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 recorded by the
Medicine
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 sector, with a figure of almost 6200.
In contrast
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, the highest drop
of
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 tutors was recorded in the Education category, with a value of 334. Moving to percentage change, Architecture resulted in the greatest percentage increment, recording 34.62%,
while
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 only 0.5%
changed
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 in the Engineering field.
Next,
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in the ratio of teacher to student in 2013, the Arts sector recorded the highest amount of students per teacher
as
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at
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 1:12
whereas
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least
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the lowest
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 ratio of 1:4 in
Medicine
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.
Submitted by Witharana Senesh Rasinda Wickramasinghe on

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Vocabulary: Replace the words medicine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • academic staff
  • faculties
  • ratios
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • dominance
  • balance
  • disparities
  • hiring practices
  • overview
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