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the table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. the table shows where the money came from annd the charts show how it was distributed. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. the table shows where the money came from annd the charts show how it was distributed. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table and pie charts illustrate how much fund was promoted by the national Government, Local Taxes, and Other sources) between 2017 & 2018 in one area of Britain which are divided into 3 categories based on how the money was excessed (salaries, technology, and buildings & transport) by percentages in the pie charts.
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, the majority of
police
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budget
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 sponsors were the National Government,
while
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 the least funds came from other sources (eg grants). Salaries (officers and staff) were the largest money distribution rather than both buildings & transport and technology which had least percentages among all. The amount of
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budget
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 from the national Government was up to 175.5
euro
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M
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 in 2017 and 177.8
euro
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M
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 in 2018 respectively. Compared to only around 91
euro
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M
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 from Local Taxes in 2017 it increased approximately 10
euro
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M
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 in a year after and just around 38
euro
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M
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 was promoted by other sources (e.g. grants) over the period given.
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, the total
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budget
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 in 2017 was 304,7 euros
M
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, and in 2018 318,6 euros
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. As regards
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funds distribution of the
police
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budget
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, we can see that salaries (officers and staff) had the highest percentages at 75% in 2017 and 69%
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 of the period.
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, only 7% of funds were distributed to technology in 2017, it doubled in 2018.
On the other hand
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, buildings and transport spent 17% of all
budget
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 in 2017 and 2018 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, euro, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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